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Help with English!
  • Guys, I would love a little help with English. Is it ok writing "reproductive hormone profile in stallions of different breeds"? Can you understand I'm saying I want to compare hormones between stallions of different breeds? :\">
  • The wording is fine and makes sense but for the context you're talking it would depend upon what you lead it up with. Without the full sentence (or couple of) it's hard to say that it will make sense in context.
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  • It would be the title. And the study is about comparing testosterone and other hormones between 5-6 different breeds. Thank you so much for helping me! :)
  • I haven't done any scholarly work beyond the bachelor's level, but that would be perfectly okay as a title, as far as I can tell. Perhaps if you use "profiles" it would indicate that there is a difference from the very start, but beyond that small change I have nothing to suggest.

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  • I agree. It would have to be 'profiles' in the plural to be absolutely correct.
    HAJ 1 - WhiteValley #60847 HAJ 3 - minimum #175
    I used to be indecisive, now I'm not so sure.

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  • Guys you are awesome. I'll send you a little thank you this evening. Thank you again and again and again!
  • Yes, I agree with the changing of profile to profiles. Sounds much better as a title.
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    Our Current Stallions | Our Current Sales
    Straws available upon request, reduced cost to breeders and owners of ancestors
  • And thank you for the thank you!
    Imation Stud ID# 2609
    Our Current Stallions | Our Current Sales
    Straws available upon request, reduced cost to breeders and owners of ancestors
  • Thank you very much for the straw. What a nice surprise that was when I logged in today. I'm looking forward to seeing what sort of foal I get when breeding season starts.

    Good luck with your paper.

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  • Thank you so much - how kind of you. All I did was agree with SandyCreek Acres' reasoning.
    HAJ 1 - WhiteValley #60847 HAJ 3 - minimum #175
    I used to be indecisive, now I'm not so sure.

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